GD in context part 2 week 2 A

During my tutorial today I had discussed about a story from an interviewee. He gave 2 stories where which is related to LGBTQ subject. And he was bullied in secondary school for not being masculine enough. And people are shunned because he acted differently. The image below shows the points i have taken from the interview. Supposingly to get another 2 more interviews but will be updated in the future blogs

Feedback was

this 2 story can develop in 2 diff direction - think about how to relate to society issue - construct it to be more solid in come to the message - how do the msg become to context into society - need more research about issue/article bully / lgbtq community - after interview to choose which direction - look for the msg - how does it look into the issue that relates to the society - next week interim need choose the chosen story and how to approached the story.